Thanks for the comments so far, the encouragement has been extrememely helpful. Below is chapter 2- so if you haven’t read chapter 1 yet, scroll down and read that first. I’ll wait here.
Betsy sat with her eyes closed as the taxi rumbled down the long country road. While the address of The Mystery House was Los Angeles, it was set out in the far reaches, far from the glow of Hollywood. Angela had called, and pleaded for Betsy to come early, and Betsy had given in, despite the late hour she