Books 11/12/04 and other things

I’m officially past 20,000 words. Yeeha! The silly folks still haven’t left for their roadtrip, which is one of the main plot points, but hey, what can you do. There are pieces of it I really like and pieces I’m completely aware need more work, but at this point I’m trying really hard not to think about the quality of it in comparison to the things I’m reading. But for those of you who have been asking to see it, this is all you get. =)

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Eva changed the subject right then by asking where his suitcase was, and I was glad. It had felt like we were standing at the edge of a darkness, and I was relieved that we